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Review:StormThief17 says:
Hi, StormThief here with your review! :)

Wow! This was very good! It is a very different style than what I usually read, but very refreshing. The use of metaphors was skillful, and I especially liked "He moved through life fueled on the words and praise of them, that faceless mass that both plants and uproots the stuff of dreams". It really made me think!

My favorite line was "And by setting out to gain it--it vanished." That just blew me away. It was a perfect ending!

I really can't find much wrong with it! I wish it were longer because I enjoyed it so much, but the length works great for the story. Good job! Sorry I don't have any constructive criticism to offer, this was just a fantastic story! Keep it up!

~StormThief17

Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving such a speedy review -- I'm very happy you liked it! My one-shots always end up a bit different than my longer stories; whereas things like 'Leaping Obstacles' and 'In The Black' are fairly straightforward prose, I've been getting a bit more whimsical with these of late. It's just fun. :D

I worked very hard on that ending line, and I'm glad you appreciated it! And no worries about the lack of constructive criticism -- hard to complain about that. ;) Thanks again for taking the time to stop off with a review!

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