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Review:Aphoride says:
Gosh, this is so good! Firstly, well done for getting it all in five hundred words. It's so compact and neat - like a little present in a box, lol.

The idea is so original. I've never thought about the idea that Harry needs to be someone's hero, needs to do something to help people after the war, but it makes perfect sense and part of me is wondering why I never thought of that before, you know? I love how it was muggle London as well, not magical, so people don't even know who he is - that way, it's so much easier for you to keep him in character (and it's just such a Harry thing to do - help the muggles).

Your characterisation was just wonderful. I love how Ginny is sneaky and kinda cunning and how those are the traits Harry associates with Slytherin - not just 'evil' and pureblood. It says so much about both of them. I also love how you made Ginny so understanding and yet such a pillar of support for Harry. It's pretty similar to how I've always thought about them, which is wonderful ;) Great minds, eh? :P

Your style is lovely, your grammar is pristine... I honestly can't find anything in this that was wrong, felt slightly off or out of place or even that could be improved. Seriously - absolutely nothing.

Write more, so I can squee over your one-shots like this again in reviews! :D

Aph xx

p.s. I just wanted to say thank you so so much for the two very, very lovely reviews you left me on Unfortunately Fortuitous. You will get a very 'oh my gosh, thank you so much!' response soon, I promise!

Author's Response: Aaaah thank you so much! I'm quite the rambler so I thought the 500 word thing was definitely a challenge haha.
I've always been fascinated by Harry's heroic tendencies and I was struck by the idea that those wouldn't leave him even when he transitioned to a normal life. I know that's also something that war veterans struggle with, so it seemed appropriate.
Thank you! I love how you read so much into Harry's Slytherin comment - probably more than I actually intended when I wrote it, but I love your interpretation. I'm going to pretend I'm actually that deep (;
Really? I'm pretty critical of my writing, so it means so much to me that you couldn't find anything wrong! And no worries about responding to my reviews; take your time.
Thank you so much for your review! :D


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