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Review:hedwigs_theme says:
HI again! Congrats on winning my First sentence challenge by the way :)

This is a great story! I especially love the way that you described Teddy's eyes, wow! I also love this end bit ""Ted and Vickie sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G!"

Oh, curse you, James Sirius Potter!

We'll just cut the scene there because some language used may not be appropriate for any age."

However, the last but where you wrote that they get married etc is probably not needed but if you want to still keep it, I think that you could probably fix it up a bit because it seems very rushed.

I also really love your title and I realize now how it fits in with the story, very clever :)


Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! I am honored! I appreciate your input, by the way :) Thanks :)

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