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Review:firefly910 says:
Jane you continue to amaze me with your talent.
I loved the style of this piece. I totally got that it was meant to be Percy's conscience. I think you portrayed his character perfectly. I always imagined Percy to feel as though he needed to life up to what his older brothers had done but not follow in their footsteps.

I feel like Percy, rather like Snape, had a one-track mind. Percy wanted to be successful and because of that other things in his life had to be forgotten.

I'm glad JKR had Percy realise what he had done to his family in DH because most of the time people in Percy's position do realise that they need their families in the end.

Great story :)

Author's Response: For a story that I wrote in about an hour, I'm very attached to it -- and thank you so much for being its first reviewer. :) I'm really happy to hear that you picked up on the conscience thing, too!

Percy and Snape do have fairly similar attributes, and they were both led astray, in their own ways, which is very interesting. Out of all the Potter characters, I know without a doubt that I am most like Percy, and so writing about him's always a bit weird. Hopefully it's not a glimpse into my future. :D

Percy /does/ need his family -- and that, in the end, is his Heart's Desire. :3 Thank you so much for being willing to give this a shot, Callie! It means so much to me that you did! ♥

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