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Review:Loopy456 says:
Hi! Guess who? That's right, I am back to read more of your work. I decided to select this story as you've mentioned it few times and I was intrigued, and also as it was conveniently situated at the top of the page! Right, I'll stop rambling and get on with it...
I have to say that I find your style of writing a little different here compared to other pieces of yours that I have read. I can't put my finger on what it is... It's annoying me that I can't identify any obvious differences, not least because I think I prefer whatever is different here! I'm not at all sure that any of that makes any sense but hopefully you'll get some meaning out of it!
Writing style aside, I think that this is a really interesting idea for a story. Malfoy is such a slimy git but it's definitely believable. I like the idea that eventually little Scorpius is named after his uncle! Hmm, I wonder what goes on for us to get to that situation with Astoria married and having a kid..? Also, that game! Typical teenagers with quite a menacing undertone, I think.
I am definitely intrigued to see where you take this!

Alex :D

Author's Response: Hello!

You have no idea how hard I laughed at the beginning of this review. It was hilarious, for whatever reason! Haha. Thanks for selecting this story, I'm never sure if I'm doing a good job on it or not, its very, very different from my other work.
You know, I don't know what it is about this story either. It is written fairly different from my other work but so is "This is Angelina", I try not to do the same sort of style for all of my work. My head would explode you know! :D
Thanks for the awesome compliment though, I'm glad that you like whatever is going on here! I don't get reviews for this very often so I was like, "Oh? Well...thank you!" *blush*
Malfoy is such a slimy, disgusting git of a boy but alas, I must say that he is, quite yummy. In a very disturbing way, like that bloke that might yank you into a dark corner and ravish you senseless. ;)
Ah...for that thing with Scorpy, you shall have to wait and see. This story might not fall into a canon-universe but you shall have to see.
Astoria will go through alot worse, trust me. I have a thing for tormenting my female leads...if you ever read "This is Angelina" or "Growth" you'll see what I mean. Mwhahahahah.
That game made me go, "Now. I hope no one actually played this..." I was a bit worried, actually. Its so naughty! :D And the menacing undertone was intentional, I wanted to give off something foul to go along with all the supposedly "superior" pureblood lifestyle. :p
You'll see what I mean if you keep reading my dear.
Much love,
Gabbie

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