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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I'm sad I haven't caught up as much as I would have liked, but hopefully that'll change soon. I've missed this story and your Draco, Hermione, and Jack (never thought I'd ever say that).

I don't mind a bit of a time jump. It was a natural progression, I think. There's only so much you can write of them doing the same thing over and over again, you know? It was nice that you revisited them meeting up at the park, though. Just so we know that they still had some interaction.

Hermione's thoughts about Draco seem to be shifting a bit, in the positive direction, which makes me happy. It made me sad at first when she kept bringing up his Death Eater past but seeing them interact in this chapter, Draco being a good guy and just following her around to help with bags, must've really opened her eyes to how he's changed and matured. I like that she's not hiding behind her grief as much and that she could take the time to recognize those changes in Draco too.

I know I've said before how staying in that apartment was good and bad for her, and I think I'm happy that she's considering moving out. Starting fresh with Jack. Just because she's leaving behind the home her and Ron built together doesn't mean she's going to forget her memories of him, no matter how scared she is of that.

I liked that you ended this chapter with more of Draco, and seeing him open up to a friend. I like Mikael. He's kind of gross, but he's passionate and he seems to care about Draco. I'm happy to see Draco finally feeling better about himself too. It's still a long road for them, but I feel like things are looking up and moving forward and I'm happy with the progress they're making with each other.

Author's Response: Although I do not wish for you to become a murderer, the fact that you do want to kill Sybil just means that I'm writing her right! I'm glad that the developing relationship is coming off right. I totally forgive you on being slack, I myself am doing the same thing as I have not been able to finish the next chapter!

Thanks for coming by, as always! :)


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