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Review:patroni says:
Oh, my lord. This is... Have you seen Madagascar? Where that small, furry animal thing is shrieking to King Julien from behind the bush? 'What are they King Julien? WHAT ARE THEY?' That's what I feel like doing!

What a start to a story. And what an imagination you've got! Please tell me you intend to be a professional writer one day; I'll chase you around with a broomstick if you don't.

Your section endings are brilliant! I know it's a random compliment but cultivating the instinct and restraint to break a story at the right moments, is a difficult thing to do. With 'Hufflepuffs,' Phineas muttered disgustedly and ' 'You're just in time for the races', Cedric said - you've given us the poster girls for good timing. They close the action, interrupt the flow, introduce a new tone, and move the story forward. So stylish, so deft- and I don't just mean the endings. And Fred, mistaken for George again: hah!

Author's Response: Hello again! I'm so pleased to see you back here.

Hahaha Madagascar! Now that you mention it, that seems pretty fitting.

I very much intend to be a professional writer one day. I figure that if I spend my life writing around three novels a year, at least one of them's bound to get published! Fanfiction excluded, of course. ^ ^

Thank you - I try to end scenes in such a way that it will make the readers think about something in particular. I'm a bit fond of cliffhangers, too.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I hope that you continue to enjoy it. :) I update every Wednesday.

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