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Review:caoty says:
Bonjour, I'm here from the common room~

First of all, I like Emmy. You get the impression that she's a nice kid. She might not be the funniest character, but she's awkward and friendly and a bit weird, so we as fans will definitely relate.

Your James is good fun, too, with his turning cats purple and shipping Filch/Pince (I actually LOL'd IRL at that). ^.^

However, I've a few concerns:
-James Jr. sounds like James Sr. with a Time-Turner, he really does. I know that it's the first chapter and so we haven't exactly gotten to deep and meaningful character development yet, but still, you might want to avoid that.
-Would Filch be using the shackles? I was always under the impression that they were for show, and after the experiences of the kids of Hogwarts in DH, I doubt he'd be allowed to keep them.
-Due to the secretive nature of the Unspeakables, you wouldn't be able to get a summer job with them.
-There are a few typos; nothing major, but they're still there.

I know I'm being pedantic as all hell and these are just minor details, but I thought you'd like to know anyway, just in case.

In any case, I hope you continue with this, because I quite like it. :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review. =)

There's more to James than that, don't worry. He has his own personality, but since we just see him first time through Emmy's eyes, it will be unveiled bit by bit.

There will be more stuff about unspeakables as well. I'm sure it will explain my choice of summer job eventually.

Glad you enjoyed reading it. =)


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