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Review:patroni says:
The Gryffindor team introductions by Priscilla and Desmond are absolutely hilarious! They had me at: 'And the Gryffindors're out!... Do you remember any of their names by any chance, Fawcett?'

And then came: different surnames for Lily (Lily Dumbledore made me spit out my tea), broadcasting the captain's inadequacy at Potions, 'Louis or possibly Hugo Weasley, ladies and gentlemen!'. Brilliant!

But I found this section a bit difficult to follow-

'Ooh, look, another ginger. Anybody surprised? Must be breeding season again.'
'Another Weasley?' asked Priscilla.
'Only if you round up. That there's the youngest female Seeker in twenty-two years.'
'Presenting Lily 'No, not that one' Potter, ladies, gentlemen and Gryffindors!'


-because it sounds like Lily is the seeker, though of course you've made it clear later on that she's a chaser.

Oh, and I really liked the moment with Henry. The parallels between him and June hadn't occurred to me before, but that moment made me suddenly sympathetic towards him. Nicely done!

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