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Review:hedwigs_theme says:
Wow what a sweet yet sad (at the end) story.

I enjoyed reading this story, it is written well and the plot is really interesting :)

Firstly, I think that maybe you could slow the pace down a bit, especially at the start. I also would have liked to know more about the heart attack, although I understand that by the time George rushed off, Ron wouldn't of had time to tell his brother anything.

All in all a very emotional story that I enjoyed alot :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! So glad you liked it :)

I do understand, though. I read over it a few times after it was published and thought it did indeed sound really rushed and all, but I didn't want to change it because I thought I'd ruin something else, and, being the perfectionist that I am, that would have made it difficult for me, but thanks for your honesty :)

Thank you so much!!!

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