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Review:classicblack says:
Well darn. It seems I've run out of chapters to read. Which means the suspense of your fantastic cliffhangers are actually going to affect me!! I can't tell whether that's a good or bad thing.

So the dancing scene between Sirius and Evie? Seems a bit like 'The Notebook' (which, if you haven't seen, I highly recommend for romantic inspiration, haha). But it was really cute and adorable and I'm actually glad that you didn't have Evie and Sirius take it further tonight. Because Evie really does need to go and find her family. And my brain might go on a cute-overload if I have to read about the perfect couple-ness of Lily/James AND Evie/Sirius.

So rewind now, back to the beginning of the chapter. Honestly, I think my brain was very close to maxing out on the amount of adorable romantic-ness it could take wit the scene of James and Lily sneaking back in late and getting caught by Filch. I ask agian: why can't every girl have a guy like James?!

It was really good for Evie's character to bring out her fun and non-dramatic side with the Quidditch match. I really applaud McGonagall for givng James that specific punishment. The Quidditch match was really well done, if only a bit confusing.

Now, to really comment on what happened last chapter: oh my gosh! Nova is working for Death Eaters! (probably) And she's stealing Time Turners from the Department of Mysteries! (possibly) Seriously, I can't wait to see how you further develop the plot and how Evie finds out about it all and why the Death Eaters specifically wanted Nova Ford and why on earth she was at Hogwarts.

So many quesitons! I expect them to answered soon with a quick update (although I can't really talk as I haven't updated my own story in months).

Fantastic chapter!
Happy writing,

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