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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
Mel! This is so gorgeous!

I remember you saying a few times that you were itching to write something more stylistic, and this was just the perfect way to do so. Your diction was just hnnnggg. So jealous. It's so hard to narrow down my favorite lines, but I think that these are the top three of my faves:

Neither of you are a somebody - a part of the plural third - you are anyone and no one.

"Rosemerta," he says drawing the syllables out and swilling them around his mouth like a wine too fine to be served at pub such as this.

You are no longer your secret's lone confidant, and his understanding wraps you like two warm arms.

Arghh the imagery and the language and the gahhh, green with envy. You worded it so perfectly. And the tense of the story, and the characters involved, and the setting in the pub with the heels of bread and the ale and the mysterious man who comes in with his seven knuts - it's just so fab. It's so different from Luna and With All Things, but it's still you and I love it, of course.



Author's Response: Sarah!!

I'm like dancing in my seat answering all of these reviews from you. Please take my offering of brownies and puppies and coffee to make up for how long some of your reviews have been waiting to be answered.

Heee. I do complain a lot. But this was a good outlet for my writing, and I'm very glad I started working on this when I did. oooh!! One of the lines that you picked out is my favorite, too, but I shan't tell you which one at the risk of sounding egotistical. :P

I'm sort of pleased you commented on the diction. I know you read all my WIPs and to hear that this sounds distinctly different from Luna is marvelous. I love me writing description, and so I always feel at risk of going over board etc etc.

Anyway... Thank you so much for this lovely review and for reading this right after I posted it and for everything. You're an amazing writer and your support of my stuff means so, so much to me. ♥


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