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Review:classicblack says:
I absolutely love all the hints to the HP books that you have in this story! An intelligence that would not be seen by Hogwarts until a girl with bushy brown hair and buck-teeth? Love is most powerful magic of all? You are so good at this!

Alright, I absolutely loved all of Sirius and Evie's conversations. Honestly, they are so superb and heartfelt. I loved them! Sirius is so adorable and young and in love. Really, I love your interpretation of Sirius.

So they kissed and I was so excited and then... nothing. She ran away. Stop being like Lily, Evie! Just let Sirius love you! Please?!

Her first transformation was pretty well-done. I expected a bit more action, but Sirius-Evie love was alright with me ;) Let me guess, this was when the Wolfsbane Potion was invented? Or did she just drink Amortentia?

On a happy note: James is such a gentleman! How cute, kissing Lily's hand!

I suppose that James's mother has died? Or something tragic has happened? Or perhaps, the owl's letter could be telling James that Evie's family was found dead? Whatever it is, I'm sure it'll be sad :(

Brilliant chapter.
Happy writing,
classicblack

Author's Response: Yay! Sirius and Evie! Yay! (Favourite couple ever!)

Ah I know. She's a runner. Damn Evie! (Don't worry she doesn't run for long!)

I didn't want too much action for her transformation because I really didn't want it to overshadow anything and I looked up the history of Wolfsbane and it was being invented around this time (hence the its not a real potion but Evie's so smart and risky and ridiculous she tried it - also, thought it might be cool to have Remus get his hands on it through her).

Ah keep reading!

T x


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