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Review:classicblack says:
Just something that popped into my head that I want to say before I start reading: what time of year is it? I mean in the story as this point. It just helps me get better into the story if I know the timeline. I know it's 7th year, but what part? Thanks :)

I can understand Lily too! It took me a little while to figure out the first thing she said, but after that it was really easy. I feel exceptionally bright right now, haha ;) Speaking of that: very creative prank/ way-to-bring-Lily-and-James-togeher.

And don't worry, inner-monologueing is quite alright with me.

Wow. Just wow. Frankly, it gave me goosebumps- James's speech about Lily, that is. Honestly, I couldn't think of anything else I'd rather have a bloke say about me. Why can't every girl have a guy like that? Makes me feel a bit sorry for Remington, but I'll get over it. I don't like her and my instincts are telling me that she's going to get caught up with Henry Vale.

Speaking of Henry Vale, I'm impressed. Frankly, I think you're one of the first authors that I've read that actually further incorporates the scorned ex-boyfriend later on in their story as an actual antagonist. Really well done on your part! Can't wait to see what his "revenge" is going to be.

On another, much lighter note: A!!! Finally! Lily and James together at last. Please keep them together! It was so perfectly sweet how James was afraid to touch Lily and then how she guided him. Really, that was adorable.

I actually find myself more attracted a man if he's wearing a suit. They're just so classy, haha.

I've realised that your story has really gotten a lot darker since the first few chapters. It started out as a light little James-Lily romance story and then you added all this plot that really made it stand out! I don't know if you meant it that way, but I like it!

Very nice chapter. So cute!
Happy writing,

Author's Response: It's getting towards Christmas :)

Yay! More prank approval! Honestly had so much fun with these pranks. It is the essence of the story so I'm glad it works well!

So background fact...that story is actually IN REAL LIFE based on a song that my cousin's husband wrote and sang for her at their wedding (we are all really good friends - close cousins are the best - and I was sobbing the entire time). I managed to film it and it just stuck with me for so long that I had to place it in my writing. So real fact - James is slightly based on a real boy here. They DO exist.

She will get caught up with Henry Vale. Definitely. He's just lying there waiting to happen. As I said in the previous response EVERYTHING IS IMPORTANT.

Yes definitely darker, and it will get even darker right until the end. That's one thing that JK taught me and it's something I hate about most huff stories - that they stay on one tone the whole time. Life doesn't work that way and it especially doesn't work that way when there's a war on.

Thank you!

T x

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