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Review:Jchrissy says:
A large volume, On the issue of Equality, lay open across her lap, and a quill stuck out from the thick chunk of hair she had pushed behind her ear.

And me? I’m eating dinner in your office.”

The fleeting thought that perhaps he should have told her that he had bought a house floated through his mind, but the sound of foot steps and a small, high pitched voice squashed the notion -- it was too late for that now.

Sorry, I just wanted to save those on my Notes while I read through your chapter. I absolutely love the picture painted on your story, those above sentences really brought it to life for me, and many more, but my fingers got sick of trying to copy and paste ;)

This is such a simple, beautiful look into their lives. You have the characters 100% canon, it was the Ron and Hermione. They way you used flash backs was so perfect, the scene changes were smooth and obvious and nothing for lost during the switching to present and past.

I almost had happy reads in my eyes when Ron said the line about not wing able to fit a cot. It was so sweet and so Ron at the same time.

You have an amazing writing style, thank you for such a sweet afternoon read!

Author's Response: ooh! thank you for this sweet review!

I've always been a bit obsessed with canon, so it is great to hear that my characters were in character. So many people have commented on that line of Ron's dialogue about eating dinner in her office. Lol. I have to admit that it's one of my favorites too!

I'm very glad you enjoyed this little one shot!

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