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Review:RosieQueen says:
It's Rosie from the blue vs bronze review battle! :)

Oh. my. gosh. That was so amazing! I love your writing style so much! The way you conveyed Remus' emotion was beautiful, and the story had a wonderful flow to it. The words you used really intrigued me, and I loved how you used the phases of the moon to separate each part of the story. I thought that was really creative.

The ending *almost* made me cry, how Remus realized he was orphaning his child the moment before he died. And I just felt so sorry for him when the girl he met freaked out on him when she learned he was a werewolf. I'm actually not a huge fan of any stories that have to do with Remus Lupin (or any marauders era stories in general) but this was just too beautifully written to dislike!

All in all, an excellent and intriguing one-shot. Keep on writing, and sorry if I rambled! :P


Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really wanted to do something with the phases of the moon because they've always fascinated me, and I thought it fit Remus' life really well (for obvious reasons hah).
I know, this story is basically one massive pity party for Remus, but I'm glad you still liked it. Especially glad that you liked it if you have an aversion to Marauder-era stories. I will now attempt to convert you, just so you know ;)
Thanks again!

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