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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Firefly!

Wow! Amazingly written point of view. Poor Harry.

I think every person mentioned in your story is spot on. Excellent job.

I think my favorite (difficult to choose by the way) would probably be Hermione followed closely by Snape.

She never left Harry. She was with him through it all... even at his parent's graves. She was brilliant and never faultered. You were so right.

You should definitely be very proud of this story.

I loved the emotion in it. Celebrate later, but this day was for the fallen and for those who may have lived, but still lost and sacrificed in different ways.

Even seeing Hogwarts in such a horrible state would've been devastating and shocking.

You did an excellent job describing it in such wonderful detail.

I want to encourage you to keep writing. Perhaps longer stories would be in your future? :)

10/10

Hope this cheers you.
Best wishes Firefly,
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Oh I love this review so much!!!
It really has made my day!

I loved writing about all of the different people, what they meant to Harry and how much they sacrificed for him. It gave me the chance to see exactly how much everyone went through, including Harry.

Thank you for saying I should be proud of this story. It is definitely one of my favourites that I have written.

Longer stories are in my future! I have a short story collection in motion at the moment based on Arthur and Molly. I also have my Dramione to write, which I am a little scared of but I'm going to bite the bullet and start writing it again.

Thank you so so much for this review, it really has boosted my confidence!


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