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Review:Dark Whisper says:
firefly,

Love your descriptions of the forest... vivid and real. And also how you described Hermione and how she tightened herself into a cocoon. Great use of analogy there.

And I do love Scabior... so good looking in the movies. That alone has me wanting to read more. :)

This is an excellent first chapter. There is mystery, a problem, Scabior... and the readers all know where she is going, but what is Draco going to say? Hmm?

Hope all is well your way...
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Hi! I totally didn't realise you'd reviewed some of my stories. It has brightened my recovery a hell of a lot :)

I really enjoyed writing the description of the forest, I always love writing about scenery but I don't do it often enough.

Ahh yes Scabior, I am a fan of him too.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. And yes, what is Draco going to say. I am going to be working on the next chapter soon. I've had to change the original plot slightly because I wasn't happy with it but I am hoping it will be under way soon!



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