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Review:Starkidgleek says:
This story is nice, short and sweet. It gives us a beautiful look into the house of Draco Malfoy, and how his future is definately not his to choose.

The way you made Draco soound like a problem is simply perfect, and is very fitting. The characters are very beliveable, and stay canon whilst still having your own flair.

My only issue is the last sentence; did you mean to say, "Her arms gathered the bundle of blonde hair and blue eyes close to her chest, *she* needed to feel their hearts beat together." ??? If not then you may want to make that end a little smoother.

Your detail is great. There isn't too much or too little. The story flows nicely, and it was very easy for me to read.

I lied, I have another problem. I want more of this story! lol... I very much enjoy your writting, and look foward to reading more in the future.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review!

This was written for a 500 word challenge, and forgot to change 'needed' to 'needing' after I removed the 'she,' thank you for catching that for me!!

Am so happy you enjoyed this story, the Malfoy's hold a bit of fascination for me.

I look forward to hearing your opinions with my other stories, too!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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