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Review:xxstaindrosesxx says:
I actually did this challenge too, but did it with Hannah/Neville.

I was glad you did a Snape/Lily. For whatever reason, that ship has grown on me so much lately. I usually don't ship that many canon ships, or read that many just because I find them kind of boring, but I really enjoyed this. I always felt like Lily and Snape should have been together, that he deserved a second chance. Sometimes I even wonder if Lily just settled for James. (I know, I'm awful for thinking that!)

Anyways, I liked this story, and I like how you tied in all the past events, making it feel as if the reader was actually seeing it through a Pensieve. There were a few bits that were confusing, but once I thought about it, it seemed to make sense, or at least it did in my weird head.

I'm glad that in Lily's heaven, she gets to have Snape, although she's a bit selfish for wanting both. :P

Author's Response: Hey! Hannah/Neville is a great ship, too :)

AHH! Thank you for calling this a canon ship. So many people claim it has no basis in canon (Hello! Just because it's unrequited doesn't make it non-canon!) and lump it in with ships like Dramione, and it's so nice to hear someone validate my OTP. Thank you.

-deep breath-

Anyway, it's great that you enjoyed this. It was meant to be a little confusing and disjointed; like you said, that's how it seems to be in a memory seen in a Pensieve.

Thanks for your kind review :)

-Amanda


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