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Review:Alopex says:
I actually noticed this chapter some time ago, right before I went on vacation, and well, as you can see, it took until now for me to review it. I'm a bit surprised no one has jumped in before me to leave a review. :( On the other hand, I get to be the first! :P

I KNEW something fishy was going to happen! Oh, that's a trap for sure! Because I like Moody and Duncan, I obviously don't want them to fall victim to it, but from a reader's standpoint, I can't wait to see what happens next. It would be a boring story if they spent more time in that shed. They're probably going stir crazy in there, so of course they are itching for some excitement.

As usual, your portrayal of Anastasia is chilling. Everything about her just makes me want to hide and stay very still so she doesn't notice me. You're handling Moody very well too. There are enough little details to remind us of how paranoid he can be without irritatingly banging us over the head with it.

This seemed like another "setting up" chapter, so to speak, in order to advance the plot toward another action-packed chapter coming up soon. It was a quick read, but it left me wanting more.

Author's Response: Thanks for being the first reviewer for this chapter!

And I think we can all agree that it's a pretty obvious trap, but of course things needed to get a bit more intersting!

So it's been taking me forever to finish the next chapter, but I think it should be up soon! Thanks again!

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