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Review:Jchrissy says:
I loved the way that Neville was reclusive during the majority of the story, but the ending showed how desperately he did need his family.

I think this is a beautiful story with a powerful meaning, and most of it has an amazing flow. There are a few parts that could benefit from a good look over, but that's the case with all of our stories :)

It made me really happy to see everyone included, I think you did a great job with the canon characters, and set us up to be very curious about your novel! Alice and Frank as the children's names, so cute!!!

I also love that you made Hannah close with Neville's parents, that kind of mental deterioration would be very hard to witness, so I think by having them them close you showed a lot of strength with Hannah's character.

Great job!

Author's Response: Aw thank you! Yeah, I think Neville is just naturally quieter, but when he really needs his family and friends he won't let anything stop him.

Haha oh yay, I'm glad you're curious! & I know, I couldn't resist! Frank & Alice are such powerful characters and I couldn't imagine Neville naming them anything else!

Yeah, Neville never introduced anyone to his parents willingly, so to have Hannah there to be close with them really shows something about how he opened up and how good Hannah is for him!

Thanks for the review, you made me smile(:


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