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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
Another great chapter! Things are starting to move along at a nice pace and I'm really enjoying this story a lot. Hopefully now that I'm on vacation I will have more time to sit down and read the rest of this story soon!

I love the interaction between Daisy and Lydia. It's so easy to see the differences in their characterizations - Daisy is a bit more shy and bookish compared to Lydia who is more coy and flirty. We see it more from Evans' POV later on when he bumps into the girls and I liked that continuity.

Actually, that whole John-Daisy interaction was great. I loved it. It was the perfect amount of awkwardness and then ease once they discovered their similar backgrounds after that literary opening. The little bit in the beginning with Charles Dickens was wonderfully done too - it made me smirk.

I really enjoyed Roger's presence, as well. Like you mentioned in the chapter, it showed us a different side of John and it was nice to see his men look up to him more rather than letting Roger's stories ruin his credibility.

I'm excited to read more about these covert missions the men will be involved in and how they will work to defeat Grindelwald and Hitler. I'm also really interested to see if the John/Daisy thing evolves at all - I hope it does, I'm a sucker for romance. :)

I promise you, I will finish this story by summer's end, and I will enjoy every chapter of it!

Author's Response: Thanks for yet another review, I'm really glad you'v been enjoying the story so far.

So I wanted to add a little bit of romance to the story here, and I liked the idea of having a socially awkward hero rather than the confident womanizers we see too often.

Thanks again, your reviews are much appreciated.

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