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Review:DumbledoresArmyOfOne says:
This is a beautiful story, just proving my opinion that you can write ANYTHING.

Luna was perfect, exquisite, whimsical, everything she should be and more. I tried writing Luna, but it always sounds forced and has never made its way out of the confines of my notebook, but you write her beautifully.

Her characterization was right on! The intelligence, creativity, naivete and faith that is Luna is present everywhere in this story, everywhere. Also, I love how you expanded this story from that one thing in Deathly hallows. You took this mention and you made something beautiful.

I love the idea of the gold paint coming from her mother. Luna's mother is a character i would love to know more about.
This line above all brought everything together for me. The Lunaness of what she wanted to do: "Something smooth, swift, darting between the portraits, linking them as one? Not to constrict, not to bond, but to connect, to bring together. As friends."

Thank you for writing this. It is beautiful.

Author's Response: eee thank you so much :3

luna is a very, very hard character to write, and it was only in the relatively simplistic terms of a 12+ one shot that I could really write her. she's very hard to write into any fic with more mature themes; I've tried and it's near impossible. so, yeah. it's hard, haha.

I always loved that little scene in DH...luna is my favourite character, and I was gutted that they cut it from the film. I thought it was so sweet, and it actually made the realisation of her kidnapping in that same chapter even more shocking. I think JKR used it to remind readers of how steadfastly loyal and kind luna is before smacking them in the face with her imprisonment at malfoy manor.

thank you so so much for the lovely review ♥


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