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Review:caoty says:
Hello, I'm here from Tag~

First of all: Tia's great. I like her, she's funny and confident. Good job with her voice there.

However, I've got a couple of things to point out. Nothing too harsh, but things like:
-Gilderoy Lockhart loses his memory and becomes rather less of a stereotypical narcissistic celebrity at the end of CoS, so I'm not sure how likely it is that he's turned back into his old self again. Also, even if he did, I reckon Harry might've managed to stop him.
- (bear in mind that Gilderoy Lockhart is about 50-something now)
sounds a bit like you've just inserted an author's note into someone's narrative.

Overall, though, this is a fun first chapter, and both of them were cute. It certainly seems like you had fun writing. :)

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm so glad you like Tia :D

I see your point about the Gilderoy Lockhart thing but I guess we don't really know how he ends up :)

Thanks so much, and I definitely did have a lot of fun writing it :)

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