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Review:Aderyn says:
Hello! I'm so glad that you've updated this story! And this is the first review on this chapter, I think?

The interactions between Hannah and Neville are very sweet in this. It's so wonderful to see them becoming closer, even though there are so many difficulties in their lives.

The scene with the nightmare seemed very realistic. Even brave people have regrets and fears. Having Neville or anyone forget the battle so easily would be unrealistic. In this story, throughout, you've done a good job showing that people don't heal perfectly, or quickly.

The conversation at the end of the chapter is interesting as well. I know that in canon or according to JKR, Hannah ends up running a pub, so it's nice to see you setting this up here. It's also realistic, it's not something she aspires to, but it's something that she enjoys doing. I'm glad that Neville is able to notice this too.

Overall, this is another great chapter. And I'm sorry I didn't get a chance to review it sooner! I'm glad that you have more time this summer, and I'll definitely keep reviewing this until you finish it.

I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you're still interested in it, especially given my erratic writing of late.

It was quite important for me to show that Hannah is also a support for Neville, as well as vice versa. I realised there was little interaction in that direction so this (and the next chapter) explore that side of things a little more.

That battle, that entire year at school and those nightmares will probably stay with them for the rest of their lives and it's only been about 3 months by this point so it's very fresh. As you said, it would be unrealistic for them to have forgotten about it or to have moved on because it's unlikely to ever happen.

I'm glad you picked up on that. It's pretty much the reason she was staying at the Hog's Head and I imagine she climbs her way up the ranks and ends up owning The Leaky Cauldron (the ultimate wizarding pub, I think it's fair to say). I didn't want her to feel like she had to go to the Ministry or one of the more traditional careers that we see in fanfiction so often.

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so glad somebody's still reading this and that's good enough for me!

I'll try and get the next few chapters written soon.

Thanks again :D

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