OH. MY MERLIN. That was intense yo. Like...wow. NONONONONONO! BLOODY NO!!! NOT CONNOR AND DOM! THEY GOTTA BE TOGETHER, THEY JUST GOTTA!!! AND SCORPO AND ROSE!!! I just--gah! You make me not able to decipher my own thoughts!!! But that is a good thing, trust me :)
Okay, lemme just say that the tension between Jimmy Boy and Summer is really starting to piss me off. Yeah, Summer was stupid for kissing Al, but she didn't exactly know what she was doing, did she? Ever heard of the effects of alchohol James? IMPARED. JUDGEMENT. DUH. They need to take a chill pill, and be boyfriend-girlfriend.
I'm sorry, Jack is really starting to bug me. You know those people who are always happy, and they try to cheer you up, but you don't WANT to be happy? He reminds me of someone like that. Yes, they are sweet, but they just need to back up, and let us act like Summer once and a while.
And Al and Natalie? They need to move to Mars and make a colony there to never be seen by the human race again. Because honestly, they are the ones who ruined Jammer (James/Summer. My own pure GENIUS!). And ruining something as perfect as those two must PAY.
As always, BRILLIANT CHAPTER!!! OVER 11,000 WORDS!!! WHOOP WHOOP! Update again soon!
Author's Response: 'twas indeed, my darling. well, as much as it sounds like a bad thing that you don't understand your own thoughts, i will rest easy under your assurance that it's a good thing ;) and yeah, poor donner (i don't think the other name is 12+) and scorose. shameee :(
the tension between james&summer is starting to annoy me, sweetheart. they're both being stubborn and stupid and neither of them will bother to look at the other side. summer knows she was wrong, but she doesn't like things being her fault, so it all becomes vair vair annoying and stupid.
jack... i love jack. i say that everytime someone mentions him, but i really do. but in this chapter, he was /far/ too clingy. he is one of those people who are just happy all the time, and as i am quite a miserable person, i can tell you that i would probably hate him if he was real.
al and natalie. urgh. booo. i hate the both of them. they need to fall of mars so that mars doesn't even need to suffer because of them. you know, jammer might be the best couple name they have... jummer, sames? urgh. they must pay. PAY!
thank you so much :D i know, this thing was huge. next chapter is in the queue :D
ellie :) xx