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Review:Mischief_managed18 says:
Oh my goodness. As I've said before, every time I come on this website I check to see if this story has been updated and each time I see it has been I get unbelievably excited.

This was an incredible chapter in so many ways. I think it's probably one of my favorites and I absolutely loved everything that happened in this chapter.

Poor Hermione. All she wants is a way for the two of them to be together and at the same time stop the prejudice she's been receiving since her arrival at Hogwarts.

The whole flower thing and Draco's animagus. Gahhh It was amazing and so sad and horrible that he had to sit there and listen to everything that went on between Hermione and McGonagall.

This chapter was so full of emotion with Hermione, McGonagall, Mr. Filtch's story (wonderfully done by the way), and Draco. I teared up several times during this chapter, it was amazing.

Keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter! You are utterly fantastic. :)

~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Mischief_managed18,

How does one really say 'thank you' for such wonderfully encouraging words? You never fail to lift my spirits like a hug and I thank you so much.

This chapter is one of your favorites? Really? There really was a lot said about how Hermione really felt... the unfairness of it all and the inability to fix it. I'm so glad you liked it. :)

The flower thing... that was my 'magical element' of the chapter. It was something small and simple, but I thought linking the flowers to Draco's emotions would be something different and serve as a visual for what he was feeling throughout such a sad conversation. Thank you for mentioning it. :)

Ah, Filch... yes. When thinking of some people having magic while others do not, I thought of him being a squib, but still at Hogwarts. I asked myself 'why'? Why would he roam Hogwarts? And so I made up a bit of backstory for him so that McGonagall could use it to help Hermione through her questions and contemplations of why things happen the way they do. The unfairness of having a twin with magic, would've been terribly tragic. I'm glad you liked what I wrote about it. :)

Thank you from my heart for reviewing like you do.
Dark Whisper


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