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Review:DumbledoresArmyOfOne says:
Thank you so much for writing this story. This is one of the best one- shots i've ever read, and every line took my breath away. It's just so perfectly exquisite. I love this passage so much, it's so beautiful
But this was different. It was not the love of youth that blossomed in each flower and rose with an eternal sun. It was not the love of stolen kisses in the dark and other secrets of the night. This was the love that would not shatter at the slightest touch nor fade with the final dying of the light.

The blue eyes held hers and she felt her heat soar, the glass cage cracking open at last, the bird flying free into the endless sky.

This is the first fix i've read about McGonagall, and now i don't want to read any more because they couldn't possibly measure up to this.

Your Albus Dumbledore was so perfectly characterized, just as i would imagine him to be, but you managed to put him into beautiful beautiful words and i love it.
I'd better stop this review because i'm rambling quite a bit and i might be crying a bit from that story.
I loved it Thank you.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I don't know what to say to this review at all, apart from "thank you" repeated hundredfold, and even then, it would not feel like enough. You've made a great many days shine brighter with this review!

Now the one thing I have to disagree with you on is that point about other McGonagall-centred stories: do read them! There are so many fantastic stories about her on this site - they constantly inspire me to write more, and I at least think they're much better than mine. But, it's a wonderful compliment that you rate this story and its portrayal of both McGonagall and Dumbledore so highly. It means a lot to have you say that, to say all of what you did. Thank you! ^_^

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