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Review:BoOkWoRm24 says:

So I've read a little bit of Seeing Double (and have been meaning to go back to is sometime) and this reminds me alot of that. Probably because of your use of the second person, but from the minute I started reading I knew it was you who had written it(I mean from the style not the fact that I read your penname :P)

And let me say that this opening chapter was just as impressive as the two chapters of Seeing Double that I've read. You're language seems very poetic to me. Lines like "It's red ink, crimson in some places, scarlet in others- but red nonetheless" come off really well.

As an introduction this worked exceedingly well. You have sparked my interest with the desk duty thing, and have left me with a lot of open ended questions, which is great.

Your description was wonderful too. I liked how you described a lot of the little details rather than the bigger ones. For instance rather than describing the room you described Louis' handwritting.

Anyway this was a really good introductory chapter and I hope to see you around the BvB battle again some time soon :)


Author's Response: Hey there!

Yeah, Seeing Double kind of... I don't know, allowed me to actually develop some kind of style? (I have no idea, I'm mostly just guessing on this, but the stuff I've been writing recently seems a bit similar). I do enjoy second person, though, lol. I should probably stop...

Thank you so much! It was hard to take it away from Seeing Double, because there are similarities between the two characters - small though they are - and I didn't want it to be exactly the same, you know?

Haha, open-ended questions... yeah, I have a tendency to leave a lot of them. And then never answer them, lol. I'm glad you liked it, though - I did wonder when I was writing it if I wasn't putting enough in it and leaving too many questions.

Thanks! :D Thanks so much - I really loved this review, sorry for taking so long to respond!

Aph xx

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