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Review:potterfan310 says:
From Gryffie review thread :D

This is beautiful, yet also sad. You have really captured Lupin's emotions and his pain of losing Tonks.

I feel bad for him, I mean he has already seen Bella kill his best friend in front if him and now Tonks.

It is really good and all the emotions are captured well, I felt like I was there running throught the battle with Lupin on his quest to find his wife.

Tip - A few sentences seem to have multiple comma's and could have been made into two seperate sentences rather than one. other than that it is really good :)
10/10
-potterfan310

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