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Review:MagicalInk says:
Okay, I'm going to try and review this without it being just hugs and butterfly kisses (and lots of love if you got the reference).

Now I really love this one-shot. Thing is, I love Remus, I love angst, and I love it when second person is used correctly.

Mash it all up in one with beautiful imagery, and you've got me melting. Yes, melting for a story. Isn't that crazy?
The structure was genius, with each cut, I could feel the story getting darker, and it was almost as a knife cutting the words and making chills travel down my spine with each dark hole carved.

You chose the moments really well. The family's love, which I believe to be essential to a werewolf or someone going through any difficult situation, the first friend, the first love, the first broken heart and the first tragedy. It makes it all so realistic it's magic ;)

And then poor Remus thinking it is a punishment. I think I would have actually had him think of death as his liberation, and then be guilty by this feeling because of Teddy and all, but that's just a personal preference anyway.

So, did I mention I loved this? The coldness and warming, the beauty and the monster? The innocence of childhood and the outcasting of a poor soul? It's full of contrasts and it was great!
Really good job! Really enjoyed reading this

Author's Response: Woohoo lots of love for me! I'm so glad you liked this so much. I've never had anyone melt for my stories, but I fully appreciate it. And I've never had anyone write such a poetic review for my story, either, so thank you for that (: Honestly, I never even considered that Remus might see his death as a liberation, but that's a really interesting idea! I think his life did get a little better at the end, with Teddy and Tonks, though, so it might've been too much angst for me to handle if he felt that way.
Hooray! I'm so happy. Thank you so much for the review!

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