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Review:BoOkWoRm24 says:
Hi so this one shot was short, but sweat.

I think that you've captured the experience of becoming a death eater quite well. Your character seems scared, and nervous, but at the same time he seems sort of resigned to the fact of becoming a death eater. He could be anyone of the Death Eaters who weren't so in love with him like Bellatrix.

I only saw one little typo, you spelled Lucius, Luscious towards the top

Other than that I really don't have any complaints or CC for this. I guess I could ask for more right? Maybe some kind of vivid description of the room of the Malfoy Manner or something?

Anyway good job and hope to see you around another BvB battle :)

-BoOkWoRm24

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for this review! :)

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