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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

Here with another review for you!

This was such an awesome chapter! I loved how they got to take Morgan to Diagon Alley. It really showed how grown they are becoming. Here they are taking him under their wing! Love it!

I really like Morgan. He fits in so well with the other three boys. I even liked his joke he made about Theo's hair! =) Theo is that sports crazed kind of kid. I can relate to him there. I also like how Greg reflected back to when Matthew took him to the Alley.

I thought that you did a great job with your descriptions in this chapter. They were sprinkled throughout the chapter in the perfect amount. I also liked how it flowed not only throughout the chapter, but from the one before it too. The pace was great and held my attention all the way through.

I am just always so inspired by your writing! You do such a wonderful job!

Keep up the awesome work! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Thank you :)

The whole story still feels very much a WIP to me right now, so as we go along please do give me a shout if something or someone tails off/fades out/gets mistreated.

I'll be back requesting 5 & 6 very soon :)

Sheriff


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