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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

Here with another review!

This was very interesting. I am glad that Theo and Greg are including Joshua. I feel so horrible for him. I cannot imagine how he would feel. I also really liked the way the boys participated in the Rugby camp. Theo is such a nut for Rugby. I was shocked at the end when he threatened to not come back. I liked how you brought Theo's love for Rugby alive. I also thought the way you twisted Morgan into the story was really awesome.

I must say that I do not know a thing about Rugby other than what it is. I don't know anything about the positions or the rules. You did a great job describing everything to make me feel like I was standing there with them. Just as confused as Joshua and Greg were. I thought the chapter flowed well and that it was nicely paced. I found it really believable and highly intriguing.

I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Keep up the awesome writing! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: First up, I don't think I've ever taken quite so long to write a response, so sorry for that. Way too busy!!

My worry with this chapter was that the rugby might overshadow it for a non-fan - pleased it's come out alright and doesn't overkill it. You can now go and google "Gareth Edwards try" and see what Theo was talking about!

Thanks as always

Sheriff


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