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Review:classicblack says:
Remington Oslo... will now become a werewolf?

Ok that's a stretch, I'll stop guessing and get to your review now.

Now wasn't this an action-packed chapter? Seriously (or should I say siriusly?), it was fabulous. You actually have a gift for describing Quidditch games, although Fleet seemed a bit like Jordan to me...

Anyhoo, I thought it was a nice touch how you had the Slytherin and the Gryffindor teams working together. It showed that just because they're Slytherins and Gryffindors, doesn't mean they have to be enemies. Slytherins are all bad, haha. Nice avoidance of generalizations.

The payback on Henry Vale was fantastic. I do enjoy when an author comes up with a good prank for the Marauders to play. It's so difficult to find good pranks these days *sighs*

Soo close... I was all excited because I thought that Lily and James would move up another step in their relationship and then the Patronus happened. Goodness gracious it seems there have been some troubles with Remus! I can't wait to read how James will heroically protect Lily! Don't know why she didn't guess it had something to do with Remus, though.

So, for the first time, I'm actually going to have to live with the suspense of your fantastic cliffhangers because it's late and I have final exams tomorrow. *sighs*. It's time for me to go to bed.

Wonderful chapter, as always. I will be back to review tomorrow!
Happy writing,

Author's Response: Nope not Remington! But close. Yep Fleet is totally meant to sound like Jordan. I have no imagination when it comes to sporting games because I don't watch any at all haha. So I took JK's lead there and it fitted. Hope you don't mind :)

So I was totally warned against the two teams working together by my beta at the time but I think I definitely made the right decision. It was unexpected and I hate stereotypes.

Yay! Good prank approval!

I know I'm so mean. Don't worry ;) Hope your exams went well!

T x

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