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Review:AC_rules says:
Hey there! I decided to follow your advice and listen to the song whilst reading it, just to see (and, well, I've just finished revising for the day and I thought a bit of indulgence could be quite fun and all).

So, I really liked some of the imagery you used in this. It was really interesting. I'm not usually a fan of really big paragraphs (that's a lie, I abuse them a lot when I write... I just don't like reading them), but the way you wrote meant it flowed really nicely and the words just had a nice sort of ring to them... which I thought fit in with the background music, as courtesy of Taylor Swift.

I do think you tried to fit in a lot within a really short piece of writing - jumping from the bit with James and the bit with Remus. It was quite jarring, the jump... which was good in a way but I do think you could have extended it a bit, maybe? I don't know, I just think there was a lot in such a short piece.

Saying that, it was really lovely and written very prettily, which I very much enjoyed :)

-AC

Author's Response: Thank you! This means so much to me! Thank you for typing out so much from the review battle. I deffinintly see where you are coming from on here, so thank you for bringing that to my attention. I cut out a part, because I felt it didn't fit, but I am now reconsidering it. Thank you for your time, I really appreciate it :)

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