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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
Another good chapter! It's interesting finding out about her muggle friends and wizard family.
Just one thing tip for improvememnt:
- Tense change "There is now a cold breeze running through my room, so I pulled my quilt back up only for her to come over" I think it would make more sense if it was "There was now a cold breeze..." just to make it flow better.
All in all a good chapter - 9/10 :)

Author's Response: Thanks :D
It's currently re waiting validation as it has been Beta'd and edited

-potterfan310


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