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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
This chapter is good, it's sets the scene nicely.
There are a few suggestions I have to improve it:
-The description is good and it's nicely detailed but I think some bits could flow better. For e.g; "I'm currently a seventh year at Hogwarts School Of Witchcraft And Wizardry" The information is good I just think it would flow better if it went something like -I'm currently in my seventh year at Hogwarts School Of Witchcraft And Wizardry.
-Basic words missing. "I had spend my summer holiday's" I think it should be "I had to spend my summer holiday's". This will improve the flow of the story and it will make more sense.
A good first chapter though :) 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks :)

When I get round to editing I will change It, I didn't realise.

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