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Review:KilledByDrapery says:
“Startle you?” she inquired with a raise of her brow. “Your father and I have been up since seven! The[RE ARE] things that must be done.” She tutted.

“The transition is so incredibly random,” mum continued as though my father hadn’t spoken. “From professor to businessman...I guess he got tired of making small money and wanted to move up int he [IN THE] world, eh?"


“I’ve been well,” Claudia said stiffly, her back straight, her legs crossed and her held her teacup firmly in her right hand." -- the last bit doesn't quite make sense.

Really good chapter! The banter between Claudia and her ex-boy-toy was really interesting to read and I'm guessing the baby is Oliver's baby brother or nephew or something... but I'll have to read on to find out! :)

-KBD

Author's Response: Yesss. You are right. :3 It was completely lame of me to put that at the end of the chapter but I couldn't help myself. I wanted to see if anyone would freak out and think it was his son or something. :)

Thanks for correcting things! It saves me so much time when I go back and edit later ^_^

Thanks for the review! I love them! ♥


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