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Review:Dark Whisper says:

Oh, wow he was MEAN about Ron. Ouch! I do hope he redeems himself. And oh... yes... even Draco in his magical world would know cancer was a very bad thing.

I love how he got instantly worried for her. You did an excellent job at describing his reaction... what he felt inside and out.

Truly, I also love what Lucius said in this chapter as well... how sometimes you have to hurt loved ones in order to protect them. That says so much and really, it is so heartbreaking, but true.

You've set up a great potential for him to show his softer side and comfort her... I hope he does. :)

Great job, Gin...
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark Whisper,

I know right, Draco was being very hateful towards Ron, but he feels he has too, which is sad. Don't worry though, he will redeem himself. :) I know, but I don't think Hermione would have thought he would have known since it's a muggle disease in my story.

That part was very hard for me to put down into words so thank you. I almost did have her have cancer at one point, but I like the way I have it now.

I really wanted that to be the message for this chapter, and Lucuis being arrested was the perfect way for me to put it at. It's really very heartbreaking... poor Draco. :(

As sad as it is, his soft side won't come in for a little while, but not to worry it will or my name isn't Gin-gin!

Thank you for the two reviews! They really meant more than I can express in words. I hope you continue to read and review!


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