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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

Okay so I am finally here with your review! The first one from me for this story and I have been so excited to be able to review for you! =)

I really liked the entire chapter. I thought you did a great job at pulling me into the story because it starts where you left off. I already am able to draw a connection to it.

I really liked Greg in this chapter. He's still the same Greg, but he seems more confident and comfortable now after finishing his first year. Josh was a really great character in this one to. You really get that sense that they are good friends and whatever bad or mean things said in the past are going to stay in the past. I think Josh grew up a lot during their first year and I am excited to see how you continue to characterize the both of them, let alone the rest of the characters.

The flow was smooth and the pace was steady. I LOVE your descriptions! They are always so vivid and easy to picture. Not to mention that you word your descriptions so nicely that they are as natural as can be.

I am super excited that they found the room of requirement! I also hope that Professor Tregeagle continues to get better. I am just so intrigued at what else is going to happen!! I didn't see anything that was confusing or that I didn't like.

Keep up the awesome work! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Thank you :)

I had a few weeks off writing before this one began again so I'm glad it gets back into the swing of things.

You are right about Josh - he definitely had a lot of growing up to do... and for reasons you'll find out more about in the next chapter, he's got more to deal with than you yet know.

Thanks as always

Sheriff


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