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Review:waluigii says:
Woaah amazing story!! So I started reading last night and couldn't bring myself to stop, was reading until 3.10am =S definitely the best I've read in a looong time.

I generally hate reading WIPs because it means I have to wait ages to find out what happens next, and nothing compares to the disappointment when you're following a story through, then the author decides to abandon =O so please don't do that! So, about hating to read WIPs, the 1st was so good and I really wanted to find out what happens between Anne and Oliver (her and George don't look like they'll last romantically, but could be awesome friends) so I started reading number 2. Its fantastic so far, got some really good twists in there that I'm waiting to develop- the worst part is the suspense!
Really looking forward to see how Oliver responds to her kidnap, and who's taken her? Why is Drew acting so sketchy, he does have an involvement doesn't he? And why was he so nice and helpful to Anne with getting Oliver's letter? Was that part of his plan to get at Amy? Her relationship with Pucey was hilarious btw, couldn't stop laughing at the 'I want to break up but can't when you snog me' situation. And what's the general response from hogworts that a student has been snatched? So exciting!! Can't wait to find out the grand scheme of things and overall storyline. Love all the little storylines too, and the relationships developing between different characters (the Seamus situation seems to be a nice little side-plot, will Seamus become a more integral part of the main story?). Love the Harry Potter thing going on too, how he's almost out of the picture and we forget about him, then he pops up again. Would be interesting to find out more about Verity. Also very curious about Anne's dreams- why does she get them, what's their significance?

Soo.. In my desperation to find out when you're updating next, I looked through all your 'last updated dates' and there's been nothing this year D= (very very sad face). Please please update soon, pining for Anne and Oliver to finally properly get together (and Anne to be rescued 1st!) What kind of sacrifices are going to be made along the way? Almost disappointed she's been kidnapped- I was looking forward to interesting quidditch situations at hogwarts, playing for her house etc and all the funny situations that could make. Also was hoping to hear Oliver's response to her being on the team, and would her playing get good enough for her to consider it a career option to be with Oliver? Or is it just a minor thing for laughs?

Ohh and I've literally just created a account just to review this and BEG you to update asap.. So uhhh.. Please please please update sooon =D x

Author's Response: I'm really annoyed - I wrote a nice, long response to this, and then my internet messed up.

I suppose we'll have to settle for the brief then: You'll probably hate me, but I am not going to give away any of the plot. Just to say that there will be plenty of laughs, but some of that may have to be given up for the growing up that Anne is going to do.

As for the update... well I happen to know that the next chapter is in the queue as I type! Thank you so much for the supportive message - hope to hear from you soon. x

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