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Review:shoveitsunshine says:
Oh gosh, I love how you've characterised Remus; as well as (obviously) his relationship with Sirius. The two of them have just been through so much together, and I think you can really feel that here. Also, nonlinear is awesome, and then James giving his blessing; asdfghjkl;

Then, there was this part:
"You knew my father?"

Harry looks at you with Lily's eyes and your hand slips, "Yes." (Murderer, failure, murderer, liar.)

There are no memories other than this.

+ the ending (!) "You are bathing in green" ; I know it's a bit gruesome, but I love this description of the killing curse.

Just. A great, great story.

Author's Response: You're my sunshine, really. Thank you so much for those kind words! You're very sweet. I love when reviewers quote me. I love the part about James too, that's just very awkward and breathes sixteen, doesn't it? And yes, the ending was gruesome, sudden and out of the blue, which is how death is. Thank you so much for all those wonderful words *squee*.

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