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Review:Evermore says:
Well, you made me cry. Does that sum up my feelings? No? Oh...well...some CC?

*I was pretty confused about how Frank and Alice were still alive years later. i understood the basic concept, but it wasn't explained enough for me to go 'I got this, I know exactly what got us here, cool, I got this'

*Trying to hook Albus and Alice up? When Frank calls her aunt ginny? No, no, no. I'm sure you can see whats wrong with that;P thats a cousin for cousins deal.

I really liked this, and I truly did cry. Good luck in summer's challenge, I think you've got a good chance of winning!

xx

Ever

Author's Response: Haha well I'm glad I was able to make you cry (even if that does sound horrible)

Well it wasnt too much later after the war that Hannah and Neville got marrie and had kids, so Frank and Alice really werent thaaat old. I do see what you mean though.

Hahahah, yeah :p well I think Frank calls everyone from the Weasleys Uncle & Aunt just because he's so young and has no aunts and uncles for him self (I always pictured Hannah an only child, like Neville) But i'll keep that in mind for when i write my other story with them, because it is going to be an Alice/Albus story and that would be quite disturbing lol. He'll probably just grow out of calling them that! Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!

-Amanda


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