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Review:long_live_luna_bellatrix says:
Hello! I think you've got a good premise for a story here. Not only does Cassie have to manage the wizard-Muggle relationship, but she's also going to have to get into the British vs American thing soon, which should add more fun.

I like the way you immediately introduced us to the issue by bringing Cassie and Logan to King's Cross on the one day of the year it's absolutely flooded with witches and wizards. You also let us in on the James background, something that looks like it will keep coming back to bite Cassie in the butt, no matter where she is.

I hope to see some of Cassie's Ravenclaw side soon. I see far too many of the pretty, social, accident-prone girls in stories where some other traits are throw their way for the sake of it, then are completely forgotten about. She has potential, as does Logan, so it would be nice to exactly what makes her a Ravenclaw in future chapters. This is the first one, so it's not necessarily something I'd need to see here. But certainly later on.

Overall, nice job! You've started off well here.

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