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Review:PenguinsWillReignSupreme says:
So I came to this given that it's a prequel (kind of) to 'Whispers in the Night' and I'm really glad I did. This is so haunting and harrowing, especially at the start. It's far darker than I expected it to be but it really gives me a greater insight into the Molly from the sequel and perhaps a small hint regarding what's to come there in terms of her character.

Your style in this is a little different but it works: the fragmentation of the sentences was especially striking and really links with her state of mind in this story. It was almost violent in the way her character's been written but that is wholly intended as a compliment because it really is stunning.

I think you have a bit of a masterpiece here, actually, especially stylistically. It's very different from a lot of what's on HPFF and needs a bit more love! It's really special.

Author's Response: I have another huge thank you to you for all of your lovely words! Seeing all these reviews from you made me squee like a child, they are all so nice.

I think this is the best response so far for this story, you got it and got the violence and harrowing ( i really like your word choice, it really encompasses this piece exactly) emotions and atmosphere that i was attempting at.

This is actually one of my favourites that i've written, i'm not sure why, but i really enjoyed exploring Molly here and she sort of tumbled out this way when i started writing. The only thing that was planned for this was that is was supposed to be a Molly/Lysander pairing, everything else just sort of happened. Anyway, it sort of sparked me into writing a sequel of sorts to it. I'd probably just say they are written in the same universe.

Anyway, thanks so much for your words, i don't even know what to say to them, but it blows me away to hear your compliments on this piece especially. I always think that it's just styled too weirdly to be liked by many. Thank you times 100, really. XD.

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