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Review:potter_nerd says:
I think you've described Dominique's emotions really well. The sadness, the pain, sorrow, frustration- everything. The only thing I found a little odd was Lysander's reaction. It's obvious that he doesn't like his brother, but I wouldn't expect him to be so.. cocky? when his brother's on his deathbed.
I like the story line, Lorc/Dom/Lys isn't all that uncommon but I've never read one like this.
Nice chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried really hard to get the grief across - usually it's around for one chapter and then BAM they are all right... but Dom's grief plays such a massive part in this story that it is difficult to avoid.

Lysander hated Lorcan, hence the cockiness.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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