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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Hello there! So I'm finally here to read your entry for my challenge. I apologize for the delay, but I absolutely adored your piece.

It was brilliant. So unique. I really loved how you had it all set up, some things in italics and in parenthesis. I had never seen anything like that before. The set up was so genuine and so unique, and it flowed together so flawlessly. Sometimes I much prefer the shorter sentences to the longer, descriptive ones. I really feel like a message is given with short sentences, and you really delivered all of the messages quite well in this piece. I could feel the emotion meant to be delivered in each one.

It was so brilliant. And such a different take on the Weasley sisters, and strangely, I can see this being true. I just picture Vic as this Mary-Sue girl, and of course Dominique would be living in her sister's shadow, and of course she would feel things like this.

Just wow in every aspect of this piece. I absolutely adored it, and brilliant use of the lyric. It was adapted perfectly.

You will have to check back in the Hall of Fame topic in the Challenge Section in a week or so for the announcing of places! Good luck! And thanks so much for your time and contribution. You got a beautiful piece of work out of it!

Author's Response: Hi! I'm so pleased you like my entry :D I'm honestly so incredibly flattered by all the feedback I've got back on this story- I'm all happy whenever I read the reviews!! The short sentences technique wasn't one that I was initially going to use, but it sort of evolved as I got into writing it and everything seemed to slot together.

EE THANK YOU! I'll be checking the Hall of Fame topic :)
-LWG


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