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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
This story just keeps getting better every time I read it. :)
The way you introduce characters, revealing their personalities through their actions, is so much more fun to read than "This is Teddy Lupin. He is fit and likes Quidditch.". I love it!
Also, you have a pretty great sense of humor, as evidenced in this chapter.
"I don't know why people associate romance to France. I associate it with cheese, wine, and pointed noses."
Audrey is hilarious, and so very unique.
One thing (and this is sooo nitpicky, but I just wanted to mention it) that I was a little iffy about was Dom's accent in the very short sentence she spoke in the middle of a paragraph. (Super picky, right?)
To me, she sounded a bit like Viktor Krum, who is Bulgarian. It wasn't a big deal, and if you think it sounds like French, then who am I to argue?!
I'm probably wrong anyways. :)
So, in conclusion, you're a wonderful writer and your characters are wonderful, and everything is just... Wonderful. :)
Write like the wind, so that I can read your next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Aww thank you! Lol the France thing is actually a personal opinion XD And you're right about the accent - I thought so too when I wrote it down (and said it aloud about fifty times) but I can't be arsed with changing it at the moment. Not nitpicky at all! Akjashjasd thank you so much you wonderful person! I will try and update as soon as possible (:

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